living life in similies and metaphors,
living a life written in verse and prose,
the complexities and complications,
of a complex sentence compounded.
when u've lived your life,
and wait for the final call...
u will not say,
"my life was like a kite,blowing in the wind,buffetted by the gust,flying among the clouds."
nor r u going to say..
"my life a flowingriver,gushed and frothed over the rocks,to finally meet my destiny, in the salty seas."
Nah! when u r lying in your death bed,similies and metaphors are not going to be upper most on your mind.
the 'end' brings a clarity of thought ,a sudden enlightenment,
that life is not a complex sentence,
sometimes it can be a compound sentence,
but mostly life is a simple sentence.
and at the 'end' u will be wanting to say-
'i lived'. "i lived well"
living a life written in verse and prose,
the complexities and complications,
of a complex sentence compounded.
when u've lived your life,
and wait for the final call...
u will not say,
"my life was like a kite,blowing in the wind,buffetted by the gust,flying among the clouds."
nor r u going to say..
"my life a flowingriver,gushed and frothed over the rocks,to finally meet my destiny, in the salty seas."
Nah! when u r lying in your death bed,similies and metaphors are not going to be upper most on your mind.
the 'end' brings a clarity of thought ,a sudden enlightenment,
that life is not a complex sentence,
sometimes it can be a compound sentence,
but mostly life is a simple sentence.
and at the 'end' u will be wanting to say-
'i lived'. "i lived well"
Comments
we r so bothered abt the commas and full stops and the verb and adjective that the meaning sometimes is lost amongst the vocabulary...
if u know what i mean..